Monday, May 22, 2006

something that occurred to me this morning

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4 comments:

Carl Bryant said...

I think this poem is too short to support the repetition. I recommend lengthening it about 10 lines or so.

Your helpful workshop guy,
carl

SarahJane said...

what repetition?

michi said...

you mean: you?

word verification, a real challenge: xwxxgqyg

Arlene said...

teehee. you're a riot, sarah!

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