tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19630688.post5250585909788481423..comments2023-11-12T14:12:54.120+00:00Comments on the rain in my purse: funk is not enoughSarahJanehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02497062670296130228noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19630688.post-58028182837583941172009-10-21T02:54:12.484+00:002009-10-21T02:54:12.484+00:00I liked the others, but "Tinder Box" str...I liked the others, but "Tinder Box" struck me, as so much of your work does, as brilliant, alive, and so wonderfully crafted.<br /><br />Wow.<br /><br />Robert McDonaldRobert Mchttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04013788250792475947noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19630688.post-43057473544407689482009-10-21T01:24:46.090+00:002009-10-21T01:24:46.090+00:00Thanks, all. I'm afraid I haven't been abl...Thanks, all. I'm afraid I haven't been able to read the whole issue yet, but I look forward to reading your poems, Richard.SarahJanehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02497062670296130228noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19630688.post-27736124085508158482009-10-20T13:00:26.366+00:002009-10-20T13:00:26.366+00:00Sarah, these are incredibly good -- all three. Wow...Sarah, these are incredibly good -- all three. Wow, wow, wow! There, I said it. Love the techno piece, but really, all of them. But maybe that one best. I'll go read again. And nice to discover Apparatus. Will check it out further. Nice that it's monthly. tcToni Clarkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05667020784232675172noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19630688.post-30479329577551757852009-10-19T21:55:39.690+00:002009-10-19T21:55:39.690+00:00It is MORE than quite fine. It pierces. It shatter...It is MORE than quite fine. It pierces. It shatters. I love your poetry. The memory that colors provoke - and the way techno music creeps into body crevices - love it - almost wish I could set it to music or at least read it aloud with bongo drums in the background at some retro 'beat' cafe - wish there were such a thing (slam poetry jams just don't do it). Does Germany appreciate you? Do you write auf deutsch?Kasshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05233330248952156754noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19630688.post-47969168442679242282009-10-19T17:08:03.096+00:002009-10-19T17:08:03.096+00:00Nice to rub elbows with you in "Apparatus&quo...Nice to rub elbows with you in "Apparatus"; your work, as always, is quite fine.Richard Foxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14848075548303794214noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19630688.post-43281447949915987742009-10-19T00:07:07.069+00:002009-10-19T00:07:07.069+00:00These are so good Sarah. I especially like First T...These are so good Sarah. I especially like First Thing. I want to touch it. Tactile. <br />I like the growl and limn lines. And I am partial to Tinder Box. My nub was raw umber.ron hardyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03237321662603263344noreply@blogger.com