tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19630688.post3940555592607012562..comments2023-11-12T14:12:54.120+00:00Comments on the rain in my purse: Ground ShadowSarahJanehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02497062670296130228noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19630688.post-84276932824792840552010-01-30T17:20:36.483+00:002010-01-30T17:20:36.483+00:00Really like this. (I read it a bit ago - why on ea...Really like this. (I read it a bit ago - why on earth didn't I comment then?)<br /><br />The end reminded me a bit of Plath's "Metaphors".Dominic Rivronhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02618013365521035400noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19630688.post-49467981425785181752010-01-11T05:30:37.247+00:002010-01-11T05:30:37.247+00:00As a public school teacher, I've had to learn ...As a public school teacher, I've had to learn the Dracula Sneeze, which is less germy than the hand sneeze I was raised on, they tell me.<br /><br />I like this poem and it's softly bumptious spirit.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19630688.post-10382866047142506082010-01-10T17:13:09.752+00:002010-01-10T17:13:09.752+00:00The Dracula Sneeze.
That's hilarious.The Dracula Sneeze.<br />That's hilarious.SarahJanehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02497062670296130228noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19630688.post-80044306818685675092010-01-10T14:41:29.550+00:002010-01-10T14:41:29.550+00:00Your followers are often a delight. This blog is ...Your followers are often a delight. This blog is like a nicely seasoned meal, it delights in layers.<br /><br />The staunched gaze and vapor, reminds me of a term that I recently heard - Dracula Sneeze. It referes to sneezing in your forearm. The act of doing so makes the sneezer resemble a thirsty count.BJeronimohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05238788014692666989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19630688.post-76328262349776179832010-01-10T08:54:46.964+00:002010-01-10T08:54:46.964+00:00Thanks guys.
Kass, Ron should indeed think about m...Thanks guys.<br />Kass, Ron should indeed think about making his proclivity to fall into a poem.SarahJanehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02497062670296130228noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19630688.post-62333729480689891722010-01-09T15:18:36.246+00:002010-01-09T15:18:36.246+00:00I like all of it. Has this been published yet? Soo...I like all of it. Has this been published yet? Soon, I hope. I was especially grabbed by "staunched." <br />I like Ron Hardy's comment too. It could be its own poem if lined differently, starting with:<br />I fall over cardboard paperback book displays<br />to break the retail tension....Kasshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05233330248952156754noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19630688.post-1165431075470130102010-01-09T15:07:07.730+00:002010-01-09T15:07:07.730+00:00Beautiful Sarah. I especially like the "foot ...Beautiful Sarah. I especially like the "foot of the wren." and "There is no stay." Falling therapy. Years ago, in the book store I managed, I would fall over cardboard paperback book displays to break the "retail" tension. Ala Chevy Chase. I noticed there was something like a release when I did it. Things are falling apart here too. The "Big E", entropy, is constantly at work here in the trucking hub of the country.ron hardyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03237321662603263344noreply@blogger.com