tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19630688.post2595059822153059308..comments2023-11-12T14:12:54.120+00:00Comments on the rain in my purse: if death smells like nutmegSarahJanehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02497062670296130228noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19630688.post-81725308364390900852009-11-26T22:23:27.075+00:002009-11-26T22:23:27.075+00:00Congratulations on the publication of your poem. I...Congratulations on the publication of your poem. I clicked away and read it. I agree with Jeff. It's a lovely piece. Being a fiction writer I especially enjoyed hearing about your process of writing it. I too am learning to give my writing a little room, as in space not four walls.cynthia newberry martinhttp://catchingdays.cynthianewberrymartin.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19630688.post-71293441456696452182009-11-05T18:59:16.554+00:002009-11-05T18:59:16.554+00:00Thanks folks. I think everyone has poems tucked aw...Thanks folks. I think everyone has poems tucked away that need work and an electro shock.<br />Millss, very nice of you to read and visit. thxSarahJanehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02497062670296130228noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19630688.post-72901845363595755102009-11-05T17:54:41.419+00:002009-11-05T17:54:41.419+00:00I read your pieces from Swink Magazine, and I clic...I read your pieces from Swink Magazine, and I clicked myself all the way here just to say I like them!millsshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05320683004599721174noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19630688.post-60561688999757942872009-11-04T10:13:43.393+00:002009-11-04T10:13:43.393+00:00Fabulous work, Sarah; congratulations.
I'm st...Fabulous work, Sarah; congratulations.<br /><br />I'm still working on Perryville Taxicab, the first line of which found paper in 1969, the completion of which is a white whale.Ron.http://eggsovertokyo.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19630688.post-7371930493475441672009-11-03T23:15:04.431+00:002009-11-03T23:15:04.431+00:00You're right. 'the heart's monstrous s...You're right. 'the heart's monstrous socket' is so perfect - so rich - that, once again, I wish I'd written it. Ah, this jealousy thing - got to get ahold of it...Kasshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05233330248952156754noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19630688.post-76399377201654186772009-11-03T19:26:22.980+00:002009-11-03T19:26:22.980+00:00Jeff, that's kind of you. I'm flattered. t...Jeff, that's kind of you. I'm flattered. thanksSarahJanehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02497062670296130228noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19630688.post-55394579637681754792009-11-03T17:04:19.599+00:002009-11-03T17:04:19.599+00:00I saw the Linebreak entry before coming to the blo...I saw the Linebreak entry before coming to the blog today. It's a beautiful piece with your usual expressive imagery.<br /><br />I'm first learning patience with poetry. I always believed first words down were last words down. I'm now learning revision - the kind you do on "paper" and not just in your head.<br /><br />It's amazing how a single phrase can capture you. Sometimes an entire piece turns on it..<br /><br />Thanks for some great writing, Sarah - I always appreciate what you offer us.<br /><br />- JeffJeffhttp://www.lazarusdodge.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.com